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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@00:35It sounded very nice good work on this....
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Something i quickly wrote and recorded today. I put this picture i shot with it cause felt it fitted the song and i needed
to post something new. :aww:

Lyrics:

My Dreams


My eyes is losing my mind
My sense has lost every sight
Can't seem to control my thoughts anymore
I don't know what happened


Losing time tonight
I just don't care so much more
Not wanting to wake up
Don't want to know where i am


My dreams are just not paradise anymore,
I dream to know what wrong,
They seem to capture me by the day,
I just want to feel free and alive,

I just hope it passes away by time,
I just hope it passes away by time,

My dreams, my dreams,
My dreams, my dreams,
My dreams, my dreams,


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Lyrics, Music and Picture all made by me.
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Viegas91 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
hey man, how r you? ;)

great song!!

i do play guitar too ^^ but not so good at singing x)

keep on ;)
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Student General Artist
Good man and thanks! Really? We should make something together then!^^
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Viegas91 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
tatally agreed!!!
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Do you have something uploaded somewhere?
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Viegas91 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
i dont have uploads but i have in my pc.. ill might upload some new stuff and send u the link this week ;)
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student General Artist
Sweet can't wait to hear it! I'm really curious what you make!:aww:
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Viegas91 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
im better at electric guitar, i play a lot of metal and stuff but ill try something in your context cuz i really love how it sounds ^^

btw, i'm waitting to see some creative work on your behance profile ;)! eheh
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student General Artist
haha thanks! Yeah i know i still didn't really figured out how it works but i will try to upload some of my latest work on there!:aww:
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Professional Photographer
Hi there, this has been featured here - [link]
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you so much for the feature!:aww:
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creativemikey Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Professional Photographer
Your welcome
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner May 15, 2011  Student Interface Designer
God I love your songs XD
Seriously, I just downloaded it XD

Anyway, love the tone on this, very relaxing, and you didn't sound AS nervous as before, but there are still some things you can work on like some pronunciations of some words. (ex. Thoughts sounded a little weird, but you could tell it was thoughts ^^ )

Overall, great job I love it, just work on how you present certain words and you should be great! Love it! =)
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Yeah i kinda worked on that nervous part in my voice and got rid of it. I'm glad it actually payed off. Just need to work on my breath control a little more and my word pronunciations.
Thank so much for you're kind words and critics!:aww:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student Interface Designer
Yeah you mostly got rid of it, which is great! (and something I need to work on myself <<" ) Yeah breath control can be a really big part of this (learned that today during choir after school practice ^^ ) and word pronunciations can be helped by keeping vowels very tall, consenants very sharp, and maybe for practice to over do it (like an opera singer or something XD ) and once you get used to that you can control how much you keep it proper and how little for the tone you need ^^

I'm very glad to help! And I really do love your songs ^^
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks ill try to keep posting new one's at least once a week. And thanks again for the tips there really helpful.:aww:
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Student Interface Designer
You're welcome ^^ I'm looking forward to your next song! And I'm always glad to help ^^
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner May 17, 2011  Student General Artist
:aww:
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Uberwulf Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
it sounds nice, to me. just watch those soft pops or whatever, and it'd be that much better.
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Thanks i guess.:aww:
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounded great I thought
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CauterizeSetsFire Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you i just wrote it and record it once didn't even checked if it was OK just wanted to upload something:P
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you are most welcome
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bluedragoneye Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
@00:35It sounded very nice good work on this....
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