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Lost in you

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Well i dreamt last night i was sailing north.
But my ship went sinking in the wrong direction.
So i hit land and went ashore for something vague.

Then i searched the mountains and the lakes.
I even looked in the deepest cave's.
But i couldn't find anything shaped like you.

So i went back and i slept on grass.
Frozen and hidden from a cold night.
Then i saw you walking and looking into my eyes.
I melted on the ground and followed you into the dark.

And i was lost in you...
Its been a long time i posted something like this... I'm really busy writing some new stuff now, so ill be posting more of this kinda stuff and I'm thinking of posting some new video's of my songs to. Its a song i wrote that was inspired of a dream i had some time ago... I had it for a while so i thought ill post it now i finished it.

Any other critique you may offer is welcome, of course.


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Panda-Vision's avatar
First stanza has a brilliant tone, really enjoyed this.